Sakuragi is WOW here, he looks younger which is great since he was younger when his father dead! Also his face features, he looks Asian!!! And let's not forget the marks and bandages on his face totally interrupts that he was out of a hard fight! And his eyes,,, ohhhhh that's another story! It looks almost wit, and that he is trying his best not to cry!
Other than that, the environment is well done! The cracked wall, and the sink with that color, and also few cracks, gave in,,, this is what a poor guy's bathroom should look like!!! I also liked the add of that cotton with blood and box of bandages! It brought motion and life to your picture, so anyone would know what was going on!
ooh..ouch...an what bad English? it sounded good to me...its funny though..i was reading tht small description..and i totally saw the thugs, an the dad, somewhat, go through like a movie in my head. o,o *shakes you* you should do scenes!